Wednesday, April 2, 2014

My Essay of Percevierence

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My essay of perseverance

It was dark Winter day when I was doing an ice skating spin and I fell down like a dying dove. I got up, ready to give up. But I chose persevere despite difficulties and I listened to my teacher tell me what to do. I tried again and fell down, hard on the ice. I got up which a tear in my eye. I stood there, "Are you okay?", my teacher asked, "I'm okay," I said even though I was doing horribly. My teacher showed me a new technique to use.

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